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You are a university student who lives in an accommodation on the campus.one day you find something wrong with your accommodation

You are a university student who lives in an accommodation on the campus. one day you find something wrong with your accommodation E3M5M

Dear Sir, My name is James Petterson. I live in the room no. 09 of the hostel 01. I am writing this letter to inform you that yesterday when I came back from my class, I saw my lockers was broken while fortunately nothing was stolen. I think some notorious students do this because some senior pupils often do ragging of junior tutees. So, It may be also a consequence of harrasment done by them. Now, I have decided to get it repair. I would like to know that can I able to to restore it individually or not and also use one extra lock to protect my money and possessions safely. Please response as soon as possible as, I am using my friend's locker. Hoping a positive and speedy reply. Your Sincerely, James Petterson

Dear Sir, My name is James Possible spelling mistake found.PattersonPeterson
Petterson
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the room no. 09 of the hostel 01. I am writing this letter to inform you that yesterday when I came back from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my lockers was broken
 while fortunately
 nothing was stolen
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 notorious students do this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 senior pupils This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go ragging".go ragging
do ragging
 of junior Possible spelling mistake found.titlesdutiestreestrusteestubestunes
tutees
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, It may be also
 a consequence of Possible spelling mistake found.harassment
harrasment
 done by them. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I have decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it repair. I would like to know that can Did you mean "I am" or "I was"?I amI was
I
 able Possible typo: you repeated a wordto
to to
 restore it individually
 or not and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 one extra lock to protect my money and possessions safely
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 response as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible as, I am using my friend's locker. Hoping a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and speedy reply. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Sincerely
, James Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphPetterson.Petterson!Petterson?Petterson:Petterson,Petterson;
Petterson