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Friend invite you for a holiday, explain why you can't make it

Friend invite you for a holiday, explain why you can't make it 2bkpw

Dear Bayo, Thank you so much for your invite, that is very kind of you and i really appreciate your generous offer to join you in Paris for summer. I'd really like to visit but unfortunately I won't be able to make it because of my tight schedule. I was recently promoted to head of my department and this currently demands that i spend more time at the office. I am sure you would remember how much i love to take responsibility when we were back in college. Good memories! I would love to join you as soon as my leave application is granted, please let me know if you would be open to we postponing for winter because that is most likely the time my leave would be granted for. looking forward to hear from you, Ridwan

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.BayBaysMayoBayouKayoAYO
Bayo
,

Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for your invite, that is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind of you and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
really
 appreciate your generous offer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in Paris for summer. I'd really
 like to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately I won't be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my tight schedule.

I was recently promoted to head of my department and this currently
 demands that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 spend more time at the office. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sure you would remember how much Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to take responsibility when we were back in college. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 memories!

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 application is granted
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you would be open to Did you mean "we're postponing", "we are postponing", or "we were postponing"?we're postponingwe are postponingwe were postponing
we postponing
 for winter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
that is
 most likely the time my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 would be granted
 for.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you,

Possible spelling mistake found.Rid wan
Ridwan