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A letter to Library Managment

A letter to Library Managment 56GPn
I am a doctoral student and I am studying European History. I have to prepare a thesis since the end of the year is coming. My thesis subject is "God and Science in Europe". I continue my work with my school notes and free sources I found online. However; I lack the resources to do my homework. Many of the resources available on the Internet contain copyright and are insufficient for the information they provide. That's why I decided to examine the books in libraries. The book "God and Science in Europe" in your library is a resource that can meet my needs. But I heard that borrowing books from your library is prohibited. I would love to spend time in your library, but delivery time is approaching. Also, I don't have much time to complete the assignment. In short, I am writing this letter to borrow the "God and Science" book for one time If you accept my request I will be very grateful to you.
I am a doctoral
student and
I am studying European History. I
have to
prepare a thesis since the
end
of the year is coming. My thesis subject is
"
God and Science in Europe
"
. I continue my work with my school notes and free sources I found online.
However
; I lack the resources to do my homework.
Many
of the resources available on the Internet contain copyright and are insufficient for the information they provide. That's why I decided to examine the
books
in libraries. The
book
"
God and Science in Europe
"
in your library is a resource that can
meet
my needs.
But
I heard that borrowing
books
from your library
is prohibited
. I would
love
to spend
time
in your library,
but
delivery
time
is approaching.
Also
, I don't have much
time
to complete the assignment. In short, I am writing this letter to borrow the
"
God and Science
"
book
for one
time
If you accept my request I will be
very
grateful to you.
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IELTS letter A letter to Library Managment

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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