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1 Inviting your foreign friend for a traditional celebration

1 Inviting your foreign friend for a traditional celebration QLxWX

Dear John, Hey, it's been a long time, how are you doing? As I was busy with my work, I forgot to keep in touch with you. However, I wish to compensate for it. I came with a great idea to invite you to my country for the Onam celebration, which is a south Indian festival that is to be celebrating on the coming month that is on June 20th. The Onam is celebrated on two days. First day is for the childrens, also known as pillaronam. then the next day we malayalees celebrate our thiruonam which means the main day. It is a traditional event with a plethora of fun and it would be a mesmerizing memory for you, as you always wish to be a part of traditional events. Onam is well known for its "sadya", which is lunch. Furthermore, Sadya consists of 21 food varieties which end with desserts. As we were blossom friends I knew that you are a blogger and traveller you like to visit new places, it would be a great experience for you. So I wish you to participate in this event. I will feel jubilant if you will be here, anyway the ball is in your court. I hope that you will be able to make it happens

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 you like to visit new places, it would be a great experience for you. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I wish you to participate in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
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. I will feel jubilant if you will be here, anyway the ball is in your court.

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make
 it happens