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your sister has been in the hospital for a week. during this time, you have noticed the meals they are providing for her very poor quality. write an email to the hospital manager and include the following things:tell him/her what you have seen in the past week. complain about the food quality. offer a suggestion on how things could improve.

your sister has been in the hospital for a week. during this time, you have noticed the meals they are providing for her very poor quality. write an email to the hospital manager and include the following things: tell him/her what you have seen in the past week. complain about the food quality. offer a suggestion on how things could improve. VlX6J

Dear hospital manager, I am Kaushal. My sister pragati has been hospitalized for a week. When I have visited 2 days ago, she was eating a burger. That is available outside on the streets. I know that those guys make food for people today and they use that food the next day. Just because of this I never eat outside. I am writing this letter to you just because of the food quality. It might be affected to our health. My sister is just being recovered last day. And a couple of days ago I have seen her eat a burger and it was completely unfresh. As she is patient your staffs must care for her. Due to reckless she might have chances to unconscienced. For the suggestion, I could give that you eighter allow the people to bring food from their home for the relatives or make quality food for patients. As a result, they will be recovered as soon as possible and they will be grateful to you. Thank you. Her brother kaushal

Dear hospital manager,

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Kaushal
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pragati
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food
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people
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affected
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must
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allow
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food
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 they will be grateful to you. Thank you.

Her brother

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