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Narrative essay . My best friend

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Hello. My name is Suhrob. My surname is Qadamboyev. I am 9 grade. I am study International maths and physics school. My parents name are Xosiyat and Mardon. I have got a 3 sisters. My granny name is Gulsara. I live in Uzbekistan Republic Khorezm region. My house is very beautiful and big. There are 8 rooms. My sisters names are Dinara, Zarnigor, Malak. My best friend are Madaminov Ulfat and Shomuradov Zafar
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Suhrob
. My surname is
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Qadamboyev
. I am 9 grade. I am study International
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Xosiyat
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Mardon
. I have
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. I
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. There are 8 rooms. My sisters
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Dinara
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Malak
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Madaminov
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Ulfat
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Shomuradov
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Zafar
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IELTS letter Narrative essay . My best friend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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