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You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay

You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay 0ndeB
Dear whomsoever, I am writing to you as Kiran suggested that you have been living in Port Blair for past 5 year, I will be visiting Port Blair for the first time on 2nd of next month due to business reasons. I was hoping to explore the city while I am there. I am very fond of trying new cuisines, can you suggest some good restaurants with cheaper food? I am on a tight budget during the trip. I did some research in on my own to explore some places. Do you think I can visit three to four places in Andaman during my 3 days stay? CarbineScove, Zoo, Hadoo are some of the most suggested places on internet, I'll highly appreciate if you could suggest some of your favorite to explore. While I am in city, let us arrange to meet whenever you are free. I would like to meet you personally and express gratitude for you help. I will be available on weekend. Looking forward to meeting you. Your Friend Divya Moses
Dear whomsoever,

I am writing to you as Kiran suggested that you have been living in Port Blair for past 5 year, I will be visiting Port Blair for the
first
time on 2nd of
next
month due to business reasons. I was hoping to explore the city while I am there.
I
am
very
fond of trying new cuisines, can you suggest
some
good
restaurants with cheaper food?
I
am on a tight budget during the trip.

I
did
some
research in on my
own
to explore
some
places. Do you
think
I can visit three to four places in Andaman during my 3 days stay?
CarbineScove
, Zoo,
Hadoo
are
some
of the most suggested places on internet, I'll
highly
appreciate if you could suggest
some
of your favorite to explore.

While I am in city,
let
us arrange to
meet
whenever you are free. I would like to
meet
you
personally
and express gratitude for you
help
. I will be available on weekend.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Your Friend

Divya Moses
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IELTS letter You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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