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You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay

You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay 0ndeB

Dear whomsoever, I am writing to you as Kiran suggested that you have been living in Port Blair for past 5 year, I will be visiting Port Blair for the first time on 2nd of next month due to business reasons. I was hoping to explore the city while I am there. I am very fond of trying new cuisines, can you suggest some good restaurants with cheaper food? I am on a tight budget during the trip. I did some research in on my own to explore some places. Do you think I can visit three to four places in Andaman during my 3 days stay? CarbineScove, Zoo, Hadoo are some of the most suggested places on internet, I'll highly appreciate if you could suggest some of your favorite to explore. While I am in city, let us arrange to meet whenever you are free. I would like to meet you personally and express gratitude for you help. I will be available on weekend. Looking forward to meeting you. Your Friend Divya Moses

Dear whomsoever,

I am writing to you as Kiran suggested that you have been living in Port Blair for past 5 year, I will be visiting Port Blair for the first
 time on 2nd of next
 month due to business reasons. I was hoping to explore the city while I am there. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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very
 fond of trying new cuisines, can you suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 restaurants with cheaper food? Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am on a tight budget during the trip.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 research in on my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 to explore This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places. Do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I can visit three to four places in Andaman during my 3 days stay? Possible spelling mistake found.CarbineS cove
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Hadoo
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of the most suggested places on internet, I'll highly
 appreciate if you could suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of your favorite to explore.

While I am in city, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us arrange to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 whenever you are free. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you personally
 and express gratitude for you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. I will be available on weekend.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Your Friend

Divya Moses

IELTS letter You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

173 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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