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A museum near your home is looking for people to par-time unpaid job. Write a letter

A museum near your home is looking for people to par-time unpaid job. Write a letter oEaBB

Dear Dir or Madam, I am writing this email with regard to the available opportunities to work at the museum. I would like to volunteer myself to the job of marketing assistant. Since last year, when I moved from overseas, I have more free time than I would like to; for this reason, I have been looking for an unpaid work to do part-time. The opportunity at the museum is amazing for the reason that I love arts and also live close to the museum. To talk about myself, I finisehd my studies last year at the University of Adelaide's Marketing School. In addition, I worked at the marketing department of a famous library in Australia for six months. For these reasons, I believe I will be a great asset to you. Currently I am working every morning in a company in downtown; so, I will be free at the afternoons if you want me to work at the museum. Howerver, two times per month I have therapy at 3 pm, but if I get the job I can try to reschedule it. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerelly, Herta Alexandre

Dear Dir or Madam,

I am writing this email with regard to the available opportunities to work at the museum. I would like to volunteer myself to the job of marketing assistant.

Since last year, when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from overseas, I have more free time than I would like to; for this reason
, I have been looking for an unpaid work to do part-time. The opportunity at the museum is amazing for the reason that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 arts and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 close to the museum.

To talk about myself, I Possible spelling mistake found.finished
finisehd
 my studies last year at the University of Adelaide's Marketing School. In addition
, I worked at the marketing department of a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 library in Australia for six months. For these reasons, I believe I will be a great asset to you.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 I am working every morning in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in downtown; This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I will be free at the afternoons if you want me to work at the museum. Possible spelling mistake found.However
Howerver
, two times per month I have therapy at 3 pm, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the job I can try to reschedule it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerelly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.HeraHertzHuertaBertaHer ta
Herta
 Alexandre