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A museum near your home is looking for people to par-time unpaid job. Write a letter

A museum near your home is looking for people to par-time unpaid job. Write a letter oEaBB
Dear Dir or Madam, I am writing this email with regard to the available opportunities to work at the museum. I would like to volunteer myself to the job of marketing assistant. Since last year, when I moved from overseas, I have more free time than I would like to; for this reason, I have been looking for an unpaid work to do part-time. The opportunity at the museum is amazing for the reason that I love arts and also live close to the museum. To talk about myself, I finisehd my studies last year at the University of Adelaide's Marketing School. In addition, I worked at the marketing department of a famous library in Australia for six months. For these reasons, I believe I will be a great asset to you. Currently I am working every morning in a company in downtown; so, I will be free at the afternoons if you want me to work at the museum. Howerver, two times per month I have therapy at 3 pm, but if I get the job I can try to reschedule it. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerelly, Herta Alexandre
Dear Dir or Madam,

I am writing this email with regard to the available opportunities to work at the museum. I would like to volunteer myself to the job of marketing assistant.

Since last year, when I
moved
from overseas, I have more free time than I would like to;
for this reason
, I have been looking for an unpaid work to do part-time. The opportunity at the museum is amazing for the reason that I
love
arts and
also
live
close to the museum.

To talk about myself, I
finisehd
my studies last year at the University of Adelaide's Marketing School.
In addition
, I worked at the marketing department of a
famous
library in Australia for six months. For these reasons, I believe I will be a great asset to you.

Currently
I am working every morning in a
company
in downtown;
so
, I will be free at the afternoons if you want me to work at the museum.
Howerver
, two times per month I have therapy at 3 pm,
but
if I
get
the job I can try to reschedule it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerelly
,

Herta
Alexandre
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to par-time unpaid job. Write a letter

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  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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