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You and your classmate just received a poor grade on a major school project. One reason for your grade was that your classmate’s family member got very ill. Your classmate was distracted and didn’t contribute as much as was expected. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Explain why you had to do most of the work - Describe how the illness of your partner’s family member affected the project - Say what you hope your professor will do

You and your classmate just received a poor grade on a major school project. One reason for your grade was that your classmate’s family member got very ill. Your classmate was distracted and didn’t contribute as much as was expected. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Explain why you had to do most of the work - Describe how the illness of your partner’s family member affected the project - Say what you hope your professor will do eeX0x
Dear Professor Miller, I am writing this letter to explain the reason for having low grade that I have been received for our last academic assignment. All the project works had to be done by myself throughout the project. Even though my partner and I had divided tasks separately, I had to carry out all the phases of the project alone due to unavailability of my friend. Therefore, I was not able to manage my time properly. The condition of my partner’s mother had changed the mind of my partner completely. His mother has been at the hospital for weeks, so he was not able to attend any project discussion meetings. Therefore, he had not proper idea about his role. I would be grateful if you would allocate some extended period in order to re-submit our assignment. If I get some extra time, I will be able to plan the requirement-gathering stage in broad way instead of online survey. Then, more quality will be added into the project. Yours sincerely, Malinda Amunugama.
Dear Professor Miller,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the reason for having low grade that I have
been received
for our last academic assignment.

All the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
works had to
be done
by myself throughout the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
.
Even though
my partner and I had divided tasks
separately
, I had to carry out all the phases of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
alone due to unavailability of my friend.
Therefore
, I was not able to manage my time
properly
.

The condition of my partner’s mother had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the mind of my partner completely. His mother has been at the hospital for weeks,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
he was not able to attend any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
discussion meetings.
Therefore
, he had not proper
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
about his role.

I would be grateful if you would allocate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extended period in order to re-submit our assignment. If I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extra time, I will be able to plan the requirement-gathering stage in broad way
instead
of online survey. Then, more quality will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
into the project.

Yours
sincerely
,

Malinda
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Amunugama
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IELTS letter You and your classmate just received a poor grade on a major school project. One reason for your grade was that your classmate’s family member got very ill. Your classmate was distracted and didn’t contribute as much as was expected. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Explain why you had to do most of the work - Describe how the illness of your partner’s family member affected the project - Say what you hope your professor will do

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7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
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