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letter of Task 1 camping holiday

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Dear Rooney, I have enjoyed camping since 2005, when I met with friend of mine to spend the weekend holiday there. You will be amazed with the purity of the air. You will be able to see nature with the beautiful flowers and trees that will affect your psychology to feel more relaxed. You can feed the animals and notice how benefitial they are. You will feel calm because no too many people around you. The drawbacks to your holiday will be the availability of resources such as supermarket and stores to purchase stuff you need. Therefore, you need to take with you whatever you need. Moreover, appliances is not available there except if you bring them with you. Make sure to take extention, microwave, TV and light o enjoy more. I will not go with you, because I really went last week, and I continously go there. I hope you will enjoy your holiday Your Sincerely Adam James
Dear Rooney,

I have enjoyed camping since 2005, when I met with friend of mine to spend the weekend holiday there. You will
be amazed
with the purity of the air. You will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
nature with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
flowers and trees that will affect your psychology to feel more relaxed.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
can feed the animals and notice how
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benefitial
they are.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
will feel calm
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because
no too
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many
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people
around you.

The drawbacks to your holiday will be the availability of resources such as supermarket and stores to
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purchase
stuff you need.
Therefore
, you need to take with you whatever you need.
Moreover
, appliances is not available there except if you bring them with you.
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Make
sure to take
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extention
, microwave, TV and light o enjoy more.

I will not
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go with
you,
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because
I
really
went last week, and I
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continously
go there.

I hope you will enjoy your holiday

Your
Sincerely


Adam James

IELTS letter letter of Task 1 camping holiday

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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