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letter of Task 1 camping holiday

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Dear Rooney, I have enjoyed camping since 2005, when I met with friend of mine to spend the weekend holiday there. You will be amazed with the purity of the air. You will be able to see nature with the beautiful flowers and trees that will affect your psychology to feel more relaxed. You can feed the animals and notice how benefitial they are. You will feel calm because no too many people around you. The drawbacks to your holiday will be the availability of resources such as supermarket and stores to purchase stuff you need. Therefore, you need to take with you whatever you need. Moreover, appliances is not available there except if you bring them with you. Make sure to take extention, microwave, TV and light o enjoy more. I will not go with you, because I really went last week, and I continously go there. I hope you will enjoy your holiday Your Sincerely Adam James

Dear Rooney,

I have enjoyed camping since 2005, when I met with friend of mine to spend the weekend holiday there. You will be amazed
 with the purity of the air. You will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 nature with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 flowers and trees that will affect your psychology to feel more relaxed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
 can feed the animals and notice how Possible spelling mistake found.beneficial
benefitial
 they are. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
 will feel calm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 no too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around you.

The drawbacks to your holiday will be the availability of resources such as supermarket and stores to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 stuff you need. Therefore
, you need to take with you whatever you need. Moreover
, appliances is not available there except if you bring them with you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
Make
 sure to take Possible spelling mistake found.extensionextent ion
extention
, microwave, TV and light o enjoy more.

I will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I really
 went last week, and I Possible spelling mistake found.continuously
continously
 go there.

I hope you will enjoy your holiday

Your Sincerely


Adam James