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Advice to my friend on Camping trip

Advice to my friend on Camping trip x2AQg

Dear John, Remember you asked me about what it like to go on camping at susan’s Birthday party last night? But I was a little busy at that time and I decided to write this letter in response to your concerns. You know that I used to go on camping every weekend and it was the best time I ever spend away from work and all the other life burdens. This Summer seems to be the best time to go on a trip as it has hardly rained this season and it’s safe to say that it would be easier to set up a good fire with dried up wood which can be easily found nearby. So for you I would highly recommend camping for this summer vacation because anywhere you go I’m sure the view of nature and the smell of fresh air will relax you to the core. But u have to be aware of certain things when you go on a trip like this as there will be limited resources with you and most of the time there won’t be anyone else to provide you with extra food or water. So make sure you take plenty of food, water and other stuff needed to set up the camp. If you are thinking of camping in a deep forest you might have sleep with one eye opened as wild animals like bears and wolves might come to visit you. So with my experience in camping if you want I can take a time off of my work and come with you to your camping trip as I myself know a few places with great views where we can setup camp. Also you might have the great pleasure of learning some tips and hacks I have learned during my trips to the wild so that the next time you come on a camping trip you will be able to setup everything and enjoy the journey on your own. If you’d like to have me joined in your trip give me a heads up at least a week before so that I can get my camping gear ready in advance. Yours faithfully, Dolitha

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Yours faithfully
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