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your school pressures and stress

your school pressures and stress Q56B1
hi my name is Ha, i’m 14 and i’m from Ha Noi. I have a big problems at school and it call school pressures and frustrations because i’m not good at maths, it’s to difficult to me. my teacher said that i just needed to focus on what i’ve learned and i would understand it. but even though i tried hard to learn math, i still don’t get it in my brain. it made me feel tired, stressed and frustration about myself. and i just want to ask one question that what should i do now. please give me an answer
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hi
my name is Ha,
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i’m
14 and
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i’m
from Ha
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Noi
. I have a
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big
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problems
at school and it
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call
school pressures and frustrations
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because
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i’m
not
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good
at
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maths
, it’s to
The usual preposition to follow "difficult" is 'for" when followed by a pronoun. "Difficult" and "to" only appear together when "to" forms part of an infinitive structure. Did you mean "difficult for me"?
difficult to me
. my teacher said that
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i
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just
needed to focus on what
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i’ve
learned and
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i
would understand it.
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but
even though
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i
tried
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hard
to learn math,
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i
still
don’t
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get
it in my brain.
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it
made me feel tired,
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stressed
and frustration about myself.
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and
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i
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just
want to ask one question that what should
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i
do
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now
.
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please
give me an
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answer
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IELTS letter your school pressures and stress

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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