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Talking about your friend

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Hello ladies and gentlemen, today I will give a presentation on the topic of friendship. Like everyone else, I also have friends, and special friends. His name is Tu, I knew him when I was in elementary school, he also lives in our district. His figure is quite thin and thin, but one thing that stands out is his curly hair, which impresses many others. He is a gentle, good person and has sense of humour. In my opinion, Tu is a precious and respectful friend and I always give good things to that friend, thank you.
Hello ladies and gentlemen,
today
I will give a presentation on the topic of friendship. Like everyone else, I
also
have
friends
, and special
friends
. His name is Tu, I knew him when I was in elementary school, he
also
lives
in our district. His figure is quite thin and thin,
but
one thing that stands out is his curly hair, which impresses
many
others. He is a gentle,
good
person and has sense of
humour
. In my opinion, Tu is a precious and respectful
friend
and I always give
good
things to that
friend
, thank you.
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IELTS letter Talking about your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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