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Choose a famous person and write a formal letter to the editor describing their achievements and saying why you admire them and how they have inspired you.

Choose a famous person and write a formal letter to the editor describing their achievements and saying why you admire them and how they have inspired you. kgrxd
I am writing on the regard of inspiration by one of the colleagues. He is an energetic person in his forties, however he looks younger than his original age. I must confess that I mostly get admired by his workstyle. When one observes his lessons they witness that his dynamic approaches make the lesson bright and lively. Because of his skill to make students get concentrated to the lesson and really excellent ability to work with students force them to study hard. As a result, he has got a lot of apprentices who have won educational Olympics and other contests several times. Another obvious point to choose him is his personality. Not only the reason of his actual talent as a good teacher but also helpfulness and generosity are motions that he is highly respected among the staff. What is more, he can be a loyal friend and he has got a good sense of humour. All his personalities and behaviour stimulate any person at work and outside. Furthermore, all these above mentioned prove that he could make a good leader. I hope you would take into your urgent consideration my points that it might be an appealing article which can also inspire other people if you print out in your tabloid. I look forward to your earliest answer. Faithfully, Mekhriban Bayimbetova
I am writing on the regard of inspiration by one of the colleagues. He is an energetic person in his forties,
however
he looks younger than his original age. I
must
confess that I
mostly
get
admired by his
workstyle
. When one observes his lessons they witness that his dynamic approaches
make
the lesson bright and lively.
Because
of his
skill
to
make
students
get
concentrated to the lesson and
really
excellent ability to work with students force them to study
hard
.
As a result
, he has
got
a lot of
apprentices who have won educational Olympics and other contests several times. Another obvious point to choose him is his personality. Not
only
the reason of his actual talent as a
good
teacher
but
also
helpfulness and generosity are motions that he is
highly
respected among the staff.
What is more
, he can be a loyal
friend and
he has
got
a
good
sense of
humour
. All his personalities and
behaviour
stimulate any person at work and outside.
Furthermore
, all these above mentioned prove that he could
make
a
good
leader.

I hope you would take into your urgent consideration my points that it might be an appealing article which can
also
inspire other
people
if you print out in your tabloid.

I look forward to your earliest answer.
Faithfully
,
Mekhriban
Bayimbetova
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IELTS letter Choose a famous person and write a formal letter to the editor describing their achievements and saying why you admire them and how they have inspired you.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
221 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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