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Write a letter to the landlord

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Dear Mr. Patel, I am shashikant Verma and this later has been rotated with the warm heart and with expecting a month Delay from you to accept the rent from me and I respectfully mentioned my exact reasons for this delay in further. actually, the main reason is that I have to suffer with financial crisis because of the admission of my daughter this month in the college and as per the rules I have to pay first term fee in a single installment on the contrary. I have to get a loan for it and apart from this my bills are due because I still do not do not get my salary because of Covid 19. It's clear to you that I am working from home and couldn't fulfill the extra desire of myself, but the admission of my daughter is mandatory this month. I hope you would understand the situation and will allow me to pay rent next month. You're sincerely Shashikant Verma.
Dear Mr. Patel, I am
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shashikant
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Verma
and this later has
been rotated
with the warm heart and with expecting a
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month
Delay from you to accept the rent from me and I
respectfully
mentioned my exact reasons for this delay in
further
.
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actually
, the main reason is that I
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have to
suffer with financial crisis
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because
of the admission of my daughter this
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month
in the college and as per the
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rules
I
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have to
pay
first
term fee in a single installment
on the contrary
. I
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have to
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get
a loan for it and apart from this my bills are due
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because
I
still
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do not do not
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get
my salary
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because
of
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Covid 19
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It's
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clear
to you that I am working from home and couldn't fulfill the extra desire of myself,
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but
the admission of my daughter is mandatory this
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month
. I hope you would understand the situation and will
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allow
me to pay rent
next
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month
. You're
sincerely
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Shashikant
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Verma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the landlord

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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