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write a letter about my hometown about 200-250 words

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Hi May, How are you? I write a letter from Van Ban district ( the district in the Lao Cai province ). After COVID epidemic spread to the surrounding areas in Ha Noi, I decided to come back my hometown because I think it is a safe place will avoid epidemic well. Have you heard about Lao Cai? It is a province in Northwest Vietnam and about 250 kilometers from Hanoi to here. Lao Cai has a combination of rural and urban values ​​which includes landscapes and mordern structures. The province is a true complex terrain, constituted by some valleys lying between hills and mountain. There is located Fansipan, which is the highest peak on Hoang Lien Son range. This peak is also the famous mountain peak in Vietnam, most attracts thousands of arrivals each year in Vietnam. Besides, this land is granted by the creator an admirable variety of biological treasures: rare bird and trees. Lao Cai has a tropical monsoon climate and is diverse in different time and space. There are 2 single seasons: the rainy season and the dry season. Especially in winter, you will be able to see snow in Sapa. With 25 ethnic groups you live in. It has created the unique identity of Lao Cao, making it an abundant land in the cultural identity, the historical tradition, and cultural heirtage. So people are really kind and helpful. Moreover, with the stunning beauty from famous scenic spots as Sapa, Bac Ha, Bat Xat, Muong Khuong and the clean environmental landscape, Lao Cai province is an ideal tourist destination. That's all I can say about my home village, in my opinion, my village is a wonderful place. When it comes to Lao Cai, in my heart I always feel so proud and I will proudly introduce to everyone my hometown. I love Lao Cai a lot and I hope one day, I can do something just to contribute to the development of my hometown. I would like my hometown will become a worth living city and attract many tourist in the future. I would be happy if you could visit here when the epidimic is over. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Tinh.
Hi May, How are you? I write a letter from Van Ban district
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the district in the Lao
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Cai
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province
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. After
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epidemic spread to the surrounding areas in Ha
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Noi
, I decided to
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come
back my
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hometown
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because
I
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think
it is a safe place will avoid epidemic well. Have you heard about Lao
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Cai
? It is a
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province
in Northwest Vietnam and about 250 kilometers from Hanoi to here. Lao
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Cai
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has
a combination of rural and urban values ​​which includes landscapes and
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mordern
structures. The
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province
is a true complex terrain, constituted by
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some
valleys lying between hills and mountain. There
is located
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Fansipan
, which is the highest peak on
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Hoang
Lien Son range. This peak is
also
the
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famous
mountain peak in Vietnam, most attracts thousands of arrivals each year in Vietnam.
Besides
, this land
is granted
by the creator an admirable variety of biological treasures: rare bird and trees. Lao
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Cai
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has
a tropical monsoon climate and is diverse in
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different
time and space. There are 2 single seasons: the rainy season and the dry season.
Especially
in winter, you will be able to
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see
snow in
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Sapa
. With 25 ethnic groups you
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live
in. It
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has
created the unique identity of Lao
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Cao
, making it an abundant land in the cultural identity, the historical tradition, and cultural
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heirtage
.
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So
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people
are
really
kind and helpful.
Moreover
, with the stunning beauty from
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famous
scenic spots as
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Sapa
,
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Bac
Ha, Bat
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Xat
,
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Muong
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Khuong
and the clean environmental landscape, Lao
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Cai
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province
is an ideal tourist destination. That's all I can say about my home village, in my opinion, my village is a wonderful place. When it
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comes
to Lao
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Cai
, in my heart I always feel
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so
proud and I will
proudly
introduce to everyone my
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hometown
. I
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love
Lao
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Cai
a lot and I hope one day, I can do something
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just
to contribute to the development of my
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hometown
. I would like my
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hometown
will become a worth living city and attract
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many
tourist in the future.
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I
would be happy if you could visit here when the
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epidimic
is over.
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I
look forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Best wishes,
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Tinh
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IELTS letter write a letter about my hometown about 200-250 words

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