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Write a letter to your friend about an important festival celebrated in your country

Write a letter to your friend about an important festival celebrated in your country aJdld

Dear Kapil, Festivals are celebrated by each nation in a befitting manner. Folks are so desperate of having a whole of time on that day. However, India has plethora of festivals are celebrated by people. I would like to talk about one of the best festival which is admired the most. The name of this Festival is Diwali. It falls in November. It marks happy and joyful day to return Lord Rama to ayodhya after 14 years of Exile on this day people dressed up their selves with good attire. Houses and buildings are illuminated on this day. We greeting happiness each other in order to live peaceful life with joy. Sweets are distributed and Lakshmi is worshipped. Crackers are burnt with a great Pomp and show convey my regards to your parents. Your faithful.

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Kapil
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 convey my regards to your parents. Your faithful. 