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Write a letter to your friend about an important festival celebrated in your country

Write a letter to your friend about an important festival celebrated in your country aJdld
Dear Kapil, Festivals are celebrated by each nation in a befitting manner. Folks are so desperate of having a whole of time on that day. However, India has plethora of festivals are celebrated by people. I would like to talk about one of the best festival which is admired the most. The name of this Festival is Diwali. It falls in November. It marks happy and joyful day to return Lord Rama to ayodhya after 14 years of Exile on this day people dressed up their selves with good attire. Houses and buildings are illuminated on this day. We greeting happiness each other in order to live peaceful life with joy. Sweets are distributed and Lakshmi is worshipped. Crackers are burnt with a great Pomp and show convey my regards to your parents. Your faithful.
Dear
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Kapil
,
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Festivals
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by each nation in a befitting manner. Folks are
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so
desperate of having a whole of time on that day.
However
, India has plethora of
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festivals
are celebrated
by
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people
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I would like to talk about one of the best
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festival
which
is admired
the most. The name of this
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Festival
is Diwali. It falls in November. It marks happy and joyful day to return Lord Rama to
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ayodhya
after 14 years of Exile on this day
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people
dressed up their selves with
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good
attire.

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Houses
and buildings
are illuminated
on this day.
Did you mean "We're greeting", "We are greeting", or "We were greeting"?
We greeting
happiness each other in order to
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live
peaceful life with joy. Sweets
are distributed
and Lakshmi is
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worshipped
. Crackers
are burnt
with a great Pomp and
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show
convey my regards to your parents. Your faithful.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about an important festival celebrated in your country

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3 paragraphs
135 words
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