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Your school is going to hold its annual sports day. You want Mr Brain Lara , a noted Cricket player to give away the prizes to the budding sportsapersons of the school. Write a formal invitation in about 150 words requesting him to grace the occasion.  a) Introduce school b) Explain the whole event going to be hold c) Invite him on this wonderful day .

Your school is going to hold its annual sports day. You want Mr Brain Lara, a noted Cricket player to give away the prizes to the budding sportsapersons of the school. Write a formal invitation in about 150 words requesting him to grace the occasion. a) Introduce school b) Explain the whole event going to be hold c) Invite him on this wonderful day. LrNq8
Dear Sir, I am, Anne Thakur, principal of Vasant international school, sangrur, Punjab. I am penning down this letter to seek your presence on the auspicious event of sports meet which is going to be held on next month. Our management always put extra efforts to promote sports ' interest amid students. Our cricket team had shown several unforgettable performances even at national level and eon medals. So, to appreciate their constant toil, we decided to organise a prize distribution function. Moreover, acquainting about life stories of renown figures of sports world, also be a part of this programme Tentative date for this celebration is 10th of may. Your presence is requested, to make this eve grand success. It would be a honour for us if aspirant players will get awards from you, it act as a blessing for newly emerging stars. You are the inspiring personality for youngsters who have keen interest in games. Knowingly well, you have hectic schedule, our whole team urged you to give your time for this event. Waiting for your positive responseYours faithfully, Anne Thakur
Dear Sir,

I am, Anne
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Thakur
, principal of
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Vasant
international school,
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sangrur
, Punjab. I am penning down this letter to seek your presence on the auspicious
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event
of sports
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meet
which is going to
be held
on
next
month. Our management always put extra efforts to promote sports
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interest amid students. Our cricket team had shown several unforgettable performances even at national level and eon medals.
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So
, to appreciate their constant toil, we decided to
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organise
a prize distribution function.
Moreover
, acquainting about life stories of renown figures of sports world,
also
be a part of this
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programme
Tentative date for this celebration is 10th of may.

Your presence
is requested
, to
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make
this eve grand success. It would be
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a
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honour
for us if aspirant players will
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get
awards from you, it
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act
as a blessing for
newly
emerging stars. You are the inspiring personality for youngsters who have keen interest in games.
Knowingly
well, you have hectic schedule, our whole team urged you to give your time for this
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event
. Waiting for your
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positive
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responseYours
faithfully
, Anne
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Thakur
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IELTS letter Your school is going to hold its annual sports day. You want Mr Brain Lara, a noted Cricket player to give away the prizes to the budding sportsapersons of the school. Write a formal invitation in about 150 words requesting him to grace the occasion. a) Introduce school b) Explain the whole event going to be hold c) Invite him on this wonderful day.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
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