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You have been studying overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned home. Write to the family. In your letter: 1. Thank them for having you 2. Say what you enjoyed about living with them 3. Tell them what your current plans are.

You have been studying overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned home. Write to the family. In your letter: 1. Thank them for having you 2. Say what you enjoyed about living with them 3. Tell them what your current plans are. g5aoL
Dear Mr. Mark, How are you? Hope everyone is good there. Am writing this letter to thank you for lovely time and fantastic gesture that you guys have given me. Since, I left your place its being long time I haven't reach you properly. There are so many things which I miss alot over here. For example, our morning walks together, evening tea with aunt Martha, our tennis classes and most of the time I miss the dishes made by you almost every night. I can't forget the wonderful hospitality provided by you. As you already know that I've completed my studies and for now I have got placement in a multinational company name Google. I join here as Data analyst. Its being great over here to work. As Google is one of the known platform therefore, it would be good for me to grow with this organization. Anyway, may be I need to visit New York again by next month so I was thinking to meet you guys once again. Hope this wont bother you. Wish to hear back from you soon. Yours lovingly, XYZ
Dear Mr. Mark,

How are you? Hope everyone is
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good
there.
Did you mean "am I"?
Am
writing this letter to thank you for lovely time and fantastic gesture that you guys have
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given
me.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
, I
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left
your place its being long time I haven't reach you
properly
. There are
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so
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many
things which I miss
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alot
over here.
For example
, our morning walks together, evening tea with aunt Martha, our tennis classes and most of the time I miss the dishes made by you almost every night.

I can't forget the wonderful hospitality provided by you.

As you already know that I've completed my studies and for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
placement in a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
name Google. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
here as Data analyst. Its being great over here to work. As Google is one of the known platform
therefore
, it would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for me to grow with this organization.

Anyway,
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?
may be
I need to visit New York again by
next
month
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I was thinking to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you guys once again. Hope this
Please make sure you mean 'wont' (a habit), not "won't"/"won’t" (short for 'will not')?
wont
bother you. Wish to hear back from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter You have been studying overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned home. Write to the family. In your letter: 1. Thank them for having you 2. Say what you enjoyed about living with them 3. Tell them what your current plans are.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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