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Hi Son, Nice to hear from you. Thanks for your kind words. My efforts would not have been fruitful, have I not seen the potential in you, and for the timely and relevant cause, we are advocating for. It saddens me that we won't witness your hard work on the stage. I hope this unfortunate circumstance hasn't weakened your spirits. However, you can still put your message out there. I would suggest you post your piece on social media if you're up for it. Son, you have a powerful message you can't just keep in the dark. I fully support your future endeavour, should you consider my suggestion. All the best, Mary Feliciano
Hi Son,

Nice to hear from you.

Thanks for your kind words. My efforts would not have been fruitful, have I not
seen
the potential in you, and for the timely and relevant cause, we are advocating for. It saddens me that we won't witness your
hard
work on the stage. I hope this unfortunate circumstance hasn't weakened your spirits.
However
, you can
still
put your message out there. I would suggest you post your piece on social media if you're up for it. Son, you have a powerful message you can't
just
keep
in the dark.

I
fully
support your future
endeavour
, should you consider my suggestion.

All the best,

Mary Feliciano
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IELTS letter email about a cancellation of a contest

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
112 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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