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You received this email from a local café. Read the email and the notes you have made. Write a reply (120-150 words) using your notes, and express how you feel about the situation.

You received this email from a local café. Read the email and the notes you have made. Write a reply (120-150 words) using your notes, and express how you feel about the situation. m1wpL
Dear Krave Kafe Staff, Firstly, thanks for respectfully reaching out. It depicts your utmost care for the continued quality of your excellent service. Earlier's visit was woefully unsatisfactory. Customarily, the staff happily greets me with a winsomely beaming smile while proactively probing for add-ons. However, unprecedentedly, it has taken longer than usual to get my coffee due to the handsomely charming barista leisurely chit-chatting with nonchalant patrons. If it weren't for the sluggish slowly-paced service, I would not have been late for work. Additionally, I could have spared time to casually unwind at your lovely well-laden rustic patio had it not rained. Despite the overwhelmingly off-putting incident, I still lovingly hold high regard for your establishment. Moreover, might I propose additional labourers during heavily busy rush hour to accommodate customer-request, swiftly? To end, I'm hoping my unpleasantly poor remarks would be taken constructively by your responsibly hard-working staff. May you steadily uncover innovative ways to better your services henceforward. Much appreciated, Mary
Dear
Krave
Kafe
Staff,

Firstly
, thanks for
respectfully
reaching out. It depicts your utmost care for the continued quality of your excellent service. Earlier's visit was
woefully
unsatisfactory.
Customarily
, the staff
happily
greets me with a
winsomely
beaming smile while
proactively
probing for
add
-ons.
However
,
unprecedentedly
, it has taken longer than usual to
get
my coffee due to the
handsomely
charming barista
leisurely
chit-chatting with nonchalant patrons. If it weren't for the sluggish
slowly
-paced service, I would not have been late for work.
Additionally
, I could have spared time to
casually
unwind at your lovely well-laden rustic patio had it not rained.

Despite the
overwhelmingly
off-putting incident, I
still
lovingly
hold high regard for your establishment.
Moreover
, might I propose additional
labourers
during
heavily
busy rush hour to accommodate customer-request,
swiftly
? To
end
, I'm hoping my
unpleasantly
poor remarks would
be taken
constructively
by your
responsibly
hard
-working staff.

May you
steadily
uncover innovative ways to better your services henceforward.

Much appreciated,

Mary
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IELTS letter You received this email from a local café. Read the email and the notes you have made. Write a reply (120-150 words) using your notes, and express how you feel about the situation.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
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