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An email of complaint about services

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Dear Krave Kafe Staff, Firstly, thanks for reaching out. It shows your utmost care for the continued quality of your services. Today's visit was disappointing. As customary, the staff greeted me with a friendly smile, took my order and asked for anything extra. However, it took longer than 25minutes to get my coffee because the barista was chit-chatting with customers. If it weren't for the slow service, I would not have been late for work. I could have spared time to unwind at your well-laden patio. But it was also raining, so I wasn't able to. Despite the underwhelming experience, I still prefer your cafe. Hence, I recommend you add more staff during rush hour to accommodate customer-request promptly. Likewise, I hope my comments would be taken constructively by your staff. May you find more ways to improve your services henceforward. Much appreciated, Mary
Dear
Krave
Kafe
Staff,

Firstly
, thanks for reaching out. It
shows
your utmost care for the continued quality of your services.

Today
's visit was disappointing. As customary, the staff greeted me with a friendly smile, took my order and
asked for
anything extra.

However
, it took longer than 25minutes to
get
my coffee
because
the barista was chit-chatting with customers. If it weren't for the slow service, I would not have been late for work. I could have spared time to unwind at your well-laden patio.
But
it was
also
raining,
so
I wasn't able to.

Despite the underwhelming experience, I
still
prefer your
cafe
.
Hence
, I recommend you
add
more staff during rush hour to accommodate customer-request
promptly
.
Likewise
, I hope my comments would
be taken
constructively
by your staff.

May you find more ways to
improve
your services henceforward.

Much appreciated,

Mary
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IELTS letter An email of complaint about services

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  American English
8 paragraphs
143 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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