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You recently stayed in a hotel and an employee was very helpful to you. Write a letter to the hotel management to tell them what happened. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain what happened • Say what you would like the manager to do

You recently stayed in a hotel and an employee was very helpful to you. Write a letter to the hotel management to tell them what happened. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain what happened • Say what you would like the manager to do XGR3w
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to you express my appreciation for the extra effort exhibited by one of your staff. Their attention to my needs improved my experience with your hotel tremendously. Allow to elaborate on what happened. My name is Riddhi Prajapati. I stayed in your hotel from 14th April to 16th April in room number 301. Reason for my stayed in your hotel was for I was there to attend business meeting and your resort is nearest my conference location. Somehow during my stay I lost my vital document while I am having dinner. I realize when I came back to my room. I immediately inform your manager about my well beings. He straight away rush the footage room and try to find out my documents through the CCTV footage. And in footage he found the document fall into floor. He bring that document to me and I feel so relived. I was astonished and pleasantly surprise by his concerned. I am grateful if you could convey my gratitude to him. Also, please give him a gift as a token of thank you from my side. I will definitely stayed in your hotel in future. Thanking you once again. Yours faithfully, Riddhi.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to you express my appreciation for the extra effort exhibited by one of your staff. Their attention to my needs
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improved
my experience with your
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hotel
tremendously
.
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Allow
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to elaborate
on what happened.

My name is
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Riddhi
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Prajapati
. I stayed in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
from 14th April to 16th April in room number 301. Reason for my stayed in your
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hotel
was for I was there to attend business meeting and your resort is nearest my conference location. Somehow during my stay I lost my vital
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document
while I am having dinner. I realize when I came back to my room. I immediately inform your manager about my well beings. He straight away rush the footage room and try to find out my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
through the CCTV footage. And in footage he found the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
document
fall into floor. He
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "brings", "brought".
bring
that
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document
to me and I feel
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so
relived. I
was astonished
and
pleasantly
surprise by his concerned.

I am grateful if you could convey my gratitude to him.
Also
,
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please
give him a gift as a token of thank you from my side.

I will definitely
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "stay"
stayed
in your
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hotel
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. Thanking you once again.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Riddhi
.

IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel and an employee was very helpful to you. Write a letter to the hotel management to tell them what happened. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain what happened • Say what you would like the manager to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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