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Your salary is increased, write a letter to thank your Human Resurce Manager

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Dear Sir, I am writing to thank you for my salary increment. Yesterday, I received a letter from my manager and this filled me with joy that management considers my concern and favors me. In the recent year due to the pandemic situation, we were getting only half part of the salary because of huge loose to the company. In those days my mother got sick too. Therefore, all my savings were consumed. However, I manage to cope with the hard situation. Therefore, I needed this increment. I highly appreciate your efforts to consider my critical situation. I assure you that I will concentrate more on my job and generate profit revenues. I have made some planned strategies to attract more customers towards our brand so we can achieve the targets and recover the loss during the pandemic. I will discuss this with my manager and will shortly implement it. I would like to thank you once again. Yours faithfully Manisha
Dear Sir,

I am writing to thank you for my salary increment. Yesterday, I received a letter from my manager and this filled me with joy that management considers my concern and favors me.

In the recent year due to the pandemic situation, we were getting
only
half part of the salary
because
of huge loose to the
company
. In those days my mother
got
sick too.
Therefore
, all my savings
were consumed
.
However
, I manage to cope with the
hard
situation.
Therefore
, I needed this increment.

I
highly
appreciate your efforts to consider my critical situation. I assure you that I will concentrate more on my job and generate profit revenues.
I
have made
some
planned strategies to attract more customers towards our brand
so
we can achieve the targets and recover the loss during the pandemic.
I
will discuss this with my manager and will shortly implement it.

I
would like to thank you once again.

Yours
faithfully


Manisha

IELTS letter Your salary is increased, write a letter to thank your Human Resurce Manager

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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