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Most crimes mentioned by social in Thailand Since I was born

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Hi, every one, I want to present crimes mentioned from social in Thailand. Let's start it. 1. Somkid serial killer, He is famous serial killer in Thailand, called "Kid The Ripper", Somkid is 51-year old. Before he had started killed, he was jailed from doing perjury in case "Pu Pun Tueng" for 4 months in 2001. It was shocking because his jailed could change him as a homocide. In 2005, Somkid killed 5 woman in North-East area in Thailand, he chose sex workers or maid as his victim. The causes of his murdering such as, each one provided badly, frauding salary.
Hi, every one, I want to present crimes mentioned from social in Thailand.
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