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Issue with travel agency and writing stating that travel was unsatisfied

Issue with travel agency and writing stating that travel was unsatisfied 0Mp0G

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter with huge disappointment as the trip which was organized for Europe by your travel agency turns out to be a disaster. The trip which was organized for Europe during the first week of February was the one which we were eagerly waiting for a long time. As we have planned, the stay will be arranged in a 5-star hotel with a specific requirement which was a sea view. At the starting of our travel, without any prior notice, we got to know that the flight which was booked for us was canceled and we had to take a connected flight which gave us a huge loss. Upon that when we reached the resort, we were provided with a room which does not meet our expectations. We requested a sea view and we were not provided with that which was a huge disappointment. We would like to file a complaint regarding this concern and it will be appreciable if you can provide us with a 20% of refund of the whole amount which was paid. Otherwise, you can give us some coupons which we can use on our upcoming travel. I hope to hear from you soon regarding the concern. I will be grateful if you look into this seriously Yours faithfully Soju George

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter with huge disappointment as the trip which was organized
 for Europe by your travel agency turns out to be a disaster.

The trip which was organized
 for Europe during the first
 week of February was the one which we were eagerly
 waiting for a long time. As we have planned, the stay will be arranged
 in a 5-star hotel with a specific requirement which was a sea view.

At the starting of our travel, without any prior notice, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to know that the flight which was booked
 for us was Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).canceled, and
canceled and
 we had to take a connected flight which gave us a huge loss. Upon that when we reached the resort, we were provided
 with a room which does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 our expectations. We requested a sea Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).view, and
view and
 we were not provided with that which was a huge disappointment.

We would like to file a complaint regarding this concern and it will be appreciable if you can provide us with a 20% of refund of the whole amount which was paid
. Otherwise
, you can give us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 coupons which we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 on our upcoming travel.

I hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 regarding the concern. I will be grateful if you look into this Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphseriously.seriously!seriously?seriously:seriously,seriously;
seriously


Yours faithfully


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Soju
 George