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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in joining your esteemed company in case of any vacancy related to my experiences. I would take it as a privilege if I get a chance to associate myself with you to give better pace to my career. I would now like to explain a bit about myself. I was born and brought up in Iran. I used to work in an international logistic company as an export/import coordinator at the sales / export/import department for 5 years. After that, 7 years ago, I got a chance to enter a fast-paced environment company with many opportunities to gain experiences either personal or professional. Currently this company is the largest international logistic company in Iran. I am working here as a documentation specialist at the export department. I not only organize all export shipments, but also supervise the responsibilities of the export documentation staff. Speaking of the tasks, I must mention that it is preparing all export documents. I would like to tell you about being a self-motivated individual in all areas of my life, especially when learning new things. For example, in order to learn more about logistics, I have passed some related courses; I usually attend client meetings accompanied by our CEO. The truth of the matter is that all the above rich and rewarding experiences allow me to widen my horizon and grasp a better understanding of work. Here are highlights of my key skills: Effectively manage my time through careful planning and organization of work activities. Excellent communication skills that result in positive interpersonal relationships. In my capacity as a leader, I learn to apply new information quickly and accurately. Excellent Organizational Skills Strong oral and written English communication skills. Quick action and effectively to support my team members. Strong computer skills and proficiency in MS Office I am certain that I can be an employee in any position requiring hard work, enthusiasm and reliability. In this regard, would it be possible to schedule a meeting to discuss how I can benefit from the top-tier? Thank you for your consideration. I would be thrilled to join your team where I will give my knowledge and passion for developing business. My CV and certificates is enclosed to provide you with details of my skills and accomplishments. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ladan Tell: +98 912 568 2028 Email ID: ladankhalilinejad@gmail. com
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in joining your esteemed
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company
in case of any vacancy related to my experiences. I would take it as a privilege if I
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get
a chance to associate myself with you to give better pace to my career.

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I
would
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now
like to
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explain
a bit about myself.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was born
and brought up in Iran.
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I
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used
to work in an international logistic
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company
as an export/import coordinator at the sales / export/import department for 5 years. After that, 7 years ago, I
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got
a chance to enter a
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fast
-paced environment
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company
with
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many
opportunities to gain experiences either personal or professional.
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Currently
this
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company
is the largest international logistic
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company
in Iran. I am working here as a documentation specialist at the
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export
department. I not
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only
organize all
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export
shipments,
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but
also
supervise the responsibilities of the
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export
documentation staff. Speaking of the tasks, I
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must
mention that it is preparing all
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export
documents.

I would like to
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tell
you about being a self-motivated individual in all areas of my life,
especially
when learning new things.
For example
, in order to learn more about logistics, I have passed
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some
related courses; I
usually
attend client meetings accompanied by our CEO. The truth of the matter is that all the above rich and rewarding experiences
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to widen my horizon and grasp a better understanding of work.

Here are highlights of my key
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
:

Effectively
manage my time through careful planning and organization of work activities.

Excellent communication
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skills
that result in
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positive
interpersonal relationships.

In my capacity as a leader, I learn to apply new information
quickly
and
accurately
.

Excellent Organizational
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Skills


Strong oral and written English communication
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skills
.

Quick action and
effectively
to support my team members.

Strong computer
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skills
and proficiency in MS Office

I am certain that I can be an employee in any position requiring
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work, enthusiasm and reliability. In this regard, would it be possible to schedule a meeting to discuss how I can benefit from the top-tier?

Thank you for your consideration. I would
be thrilled
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your team where I will give my knowledge and passion for developing business.

My CV and certificates
is enclosed
to provide you with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and accomplishments.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Ladan


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Tell
: +98 912 568 2028

Email ID:
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ladankhalilinejad@gmail
.
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IELTS letter a letter to manager for applying an job

Letter
  American English
17 paragraphs
406 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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