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you have decided to donate your old books, Write a letter to the foundation of the school.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have some books related, to my studies and storybooks for kids that I want to donate to your foundation. I find out your organization has children who study. So, I sort all of my reading and study stuff that is not in my use now. The collection of books are related to science, English, moral stories, and comics. I always keep my books with me, even when they do not need me. Because I never prefer to resale my study material to a book shop. I always look for the people who are in actual need of things and items. Therefore, I always prefer to share my loved stuff with the people who value them and do not have the condition to purchase their own. My mother used to do so as she was more into the donation. After her dismissal, I love to do the activities that she taught me since my childhood. The condition of the books is extremely good. All the books have a cover, and there is no missing page in books. I have not used a highlighter or pen on books. Thus, books are in fresh condition. I assure you that students would love this little effort. Importantly, there are some solution books there, that will help students to clear their doubts and solve their troubles. It would be highly appreciated if you could tell me the correct time to visit. Yours faithfully JOhn
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have
some
books
related, to my
studies
and storybooks for kids that I want to donate to your foundation.

I find out your organization has children who
study
.
So
, I sort all of my reading and
study
stuff
that is
not in my
use
now
. The collection of
books
are
related to science, English, moral stories, and comics. I always
keep
my
books
with me, even when they do not need me.
Because
I never prefer to resale my
study
material to a
book
shop.

I always look for the
people
who are in actual need of things and items.
Therefore
, I always prefer to share my
loved
stuff with the
people
who value them and do not have the condition to
purchase
their
own
. My mother
used
to do
so
as she was more into the donation. After her dismissal, I
love
to do the activities that she taught me since my childhood.

The condition of the
books
is
extremely
good
. All the
books
have a cover, and there is no missing page in
books
. I have not
used
a highlighter or pen on
books
.
Thus
,
books
are in fresh condition. I assure you that students would
love
this
little
effort.
Importantly
, there are
some
solution
books
there, that will
help
students to
clear
their doubts and solve their troubles.

It would be
highly
appreciated if you could
tell
me the correct time to visit.

Yours
faithfully


JOhn
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IELTS letter you have decided to donate your old books, Write a letter to the foundation of the school.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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