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Write a letter to your friend describe the problem you’re facing your health?

Write a letter to your friend describe the problem you’re facing your health? Qww7b
Dear Joseph. I hope you will be fine and the radius of the soul I am writing this letter to mention that if I am facing the problem of health issue. You know that a couple of weeks I have moved to a new house which is located in Hyderabad the area is is good and there is no problem the transport and health system but a few months ago one of the company has been established over here and we are facing a lot of problems due to this health problems like sugar BP has more allergies we hope that it is a proWe heard that there is a problem for lunch affection also. So I kindly lick. I kindly request you to not to come here right now is it’s balance then I can write a letter to you. hoping you will understand this situation over here. Lovingly, Joyful
Dear Joseph.

I hope you will be fine and the radius of the soul I am writing this letter to mention that if I am facing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
of health issue.

You know that a couple of weeks I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to a new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
which
is located
in Hyderabad the area
Possible typo: you repeated a word
is is
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good
and there is no
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problem
the transport and health system
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but
a few months ago one of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has
been established
over
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
here and
we are facing
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a lot of
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problems
due to this health
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problems
like sugar BP has more allergies we hope that it is a
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proWe
heard that there is a
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problem
for lunch affection
also
.
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So
I kindly lick. I kindly request you
One 'to' seems to be obsolete.
to not to
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come
here right
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now
is
Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun)?
it’s
balance then I can write a letter to you.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
hoping
you will understand this situation over here.

Lovingly
,

Joyful

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend describe the problem you’re facing your health?

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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