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Write a letter to your friend in which you want to sell your old furniture. Describe the furniture and suggest a date that your friend can come and see

Write a letter to your friend in which you want to sell your old furniture. Describe the furniture and suggest a date that your friend can come and see o86qK
Dear Roma, I hope you are doing great. Remember when we last met, I told you that I am planning to immigrate to Canada for further studies. You know what, I got admission in University of Toronto and will be leaving the country in next month. I have to sell my furniture as it is no longer needed to me. I have one sofa set along with one double bed king size and a cupboard. You told me once that you need to buy some furniture for your new apartment, so you can have mine if you wish to. All items are in good condition and you can use it very easily. The cupboard is very spacious as well as heavy. Moreover, the sofa set has a unique design which would enhance the interior of your living area. I would be free in the next week and if you are interested to buy furniture then you can come at my place to have a look at them. Hope to see you soon. Warm wishes, Harry
Dear Roma,

I hope you are doing great. Remember when we last met, I
told
you that I am planning to immigrate to Canada for
further
studies. You know what, I
got
admission in University of Toronto and will be leaving the country in
next
month.

I
have to
sell my furniture as it is no longer needed to me. I have one sofa set along with one double bed
king size
and a cupboard. You
told
me once that you need to
buy
some
furniture for your new apartment,
so
you can have mine if you wish to.

All items are in
good
condition and you can
use
it
very
easily
. The cupboard is
very
spacious
as well
as heavy.
Moreover
, the sofa set has a unique design which would enhance the interior of your living area.

I would be free in the
next
week and if you
are interested
to
buy
furniture then you can
come
at my place to have a look at them.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Harry
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in which you want to sell your old furniture. Describe the furniture and suggest a date that your friend can come and see

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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