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Your rental accommodation has been damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to your landlord what you need to change in it.

Your rental accommodation has been damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to your landlord what you need to change in it. qVbYr
Dear Landlord, I am writing a letter to inform you that my rental accommodation has been damaged due to heavy tornado, and It has a great need to repair my accommodation immediately. The high speed of storm has come unfortunately two days ago due to bad weather, and It has badly damaged to the rental accommodation by twisting its windows, doors and broken its walls. I have no provision of hiring other accommodation to live due to hardship in money except repairing the present rental accommodation which has gone damaged, and It has a great demand in this time to repair it immediately, by replacing its windows and doors and replacing its glasses. Kindly send the carpenters and glazers to repair it. It's my humble request, to repair it by considering your first priority out of your valuable time. Hope you will definitely consider my genuine request. I shall thankful to you, for your this kindness. Regards, Ranjit Singh
Dear Landlord, I am writing a letter to inform you that my rental
accommodation
has
been damaged
due to heavy tornado, and It has a great need to
repair
my
accommodation
immediately. The high speed of storm has
come
unfortunately two days ago due to
bad
weather, and It has
badly
damaged to the rental
accommodation
by twisting its windows, doors and broken its walls. I have no provision of hiring other
accommodation
to
live
due to hardship in money except repairing the present rental
accommodation
which has gone damaged, and It has a great demand in this time to
repair
it immediately, by replacing its windows and doors and replacing its glasses. Kindly
send
the carpenters and
glazers
to
repair
it. It's my humble request, to
repair
it by considering your
first
priority out of your valuable time. Hope you will definitely consider my genuine request. I
shall thankful
to you, for your this kindness. Regards,
Ranjit
Singh
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IELTS letter Your rental accommodation has been damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to your landlord what you need to change in it.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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