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an informal letter to a work giver

an informal letter to a work giver Nrokj

Dear Sir, I am writing you as a jobseeker. I have seen an advertisement for a weekend job. I need to be employed. So I am going to ask from you about free work sets. I’ve got my reasons for wanting job such as improving my skills, my materially situation. Though, my materially occasion is not very well. From my point of view, I may work as a local tour guide, as I graduated from the University ago 3 years. I worked there as an interpreter student, too. I have got my natural aptitudes that can attract in something people. So, it is not hard to engage in sight seeing places. In addition to them, I am keen on introducing people with attractive things and giving handy information. that’s why, I can be talkative and sociable. I have ever worked for an International tourism company as a translator. Then, my qualifications and skill ha s improved. Now, my level is equal with C1. Your sincerely, Lucy.

Dear Sir,

I am writing you as a Possible spelling mistake found.job seeker
jobseeker
. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 an advertisement for a weekend job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 need to be employed
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I am going to ask from you about free work sets. I’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my reasons for wanting job such as improving my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, my materially
 situation. “Though” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Though
, my materially
 occasion is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. From my point of view, I may work as a local tour guide, as I graduated from the University ago 3 years. I worked there as an interpreter student, too. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my natural aptitudes that can attract in something This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to engage in sight seeing places. In addition
 to them, I am keen on introducing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with attractive things and giving handy information. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
’s why, I can be talkative and sociable. I have ever worked for an International tourism This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as a translator. Then, my qualifications and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 ha s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, my level is equal with C1.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Lucy. 