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Dear Rakhima Sharopova. I am writing in connection with my school’s director for I could not go to school yesterday. First, I must inform that my mum wrote application for you which this letter said about I was ill. However, due to the fact I have got a flu. Because, the day before yesterday I went to the shopping with my mum. My mum wear a hot clothes. But my clothes are not hot. Suddenly, it is raining and getting cold. Consequently, this cold day and rainy day is lead to illness. The next day we were go to the doctor but physician said I must not go to school few days. Therefore, I must apologize profusely for I could not go to school and I could not told you about this motion at the time. I hope this will have a negative impact on for me. And I will hope you do not give a punishment for me. Once again I hope my apologize will be accepted and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Medina.

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.YakimaRahimRakhineRashida
Rakhima
Possible spelling mistake found.Sharonda
Sharopova
.

I am writing in connection with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school’s
 director for I could not go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 yesterday. First
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 inform that my mum wrote application for you which this letter said about I was ill. However
, due to the fact I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a flu. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 yesterday I went to the shopping with my mum. My mum Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "wears".wears
wear
 a hot clothes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 my clothes are not hot. Suddenly
, it is raining and getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
. Consequently
, this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 day and rainy day is lead to illness. The next
 day we were Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
go
 to the doctor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 physician said I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 not go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 few days. Therefore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 apologize profusely
 for I could not go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 and I could not The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "tell"tell
told
 you about this motion at the time. I hope this will have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on for me. And I will hope you do not give a punishment for me. Once again I hope my apologize will be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).accepted, and
accepted and
 I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Medina. 