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Your local newspaper is offering an award to the community.Mention who should get this award. What he does for the community and why you think he should be offered the award.

Your local newspaper is offering an award to the community. Mention who should get this award. What he does for the community and why you think he should be offered the award. E3rQb
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to help you in shortlisting the candidate for the most contributing person in the community. I would like to suggest a person too. The award winning is a big encouragement and I think the right person should be encouraged to continue doing better. In my opinion, the cleanliness boys specially the ones who on time come to collect garbage early morning are the ones deserving of this prestigious honour. These young lads without fail they collect and clean the disgusting bit thrown on streets as well. In order to make them feel vital and discourage taking the ownership of doing cleanliness jobs and calling it menial will have an impact. We will make some difference in society by rewarding the cleanliness in charge. Moreover, they are the most generous ones who do not hastily come claiming for their just deserve earnings. The way they diligently take up their work is beyond compare. Looking forward to see a deserving candidate getting appreciated this time. Yours sincerely, Karishma
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
help
you in shortlisting the candidate for the most contributing person in the community. I would like to suggest a person too.

The
award winning
is a
big
encouragement and I
think
the right person should
be encouraged
to continue doing better. In my opinion, the cleanliness boys
specially
the
ones
who on time
come
to collect garbage early morning are the
ones
deserving of this prestigious
honour
. These young lads without fail they collect and clean the disgusting bit thrown on streets
as well
. In order to
make
them feel vital and discourage taking the ownership of doing cleanliness jobs and calling it menial will have an impact. We will
make
some
difference in society by rewarding the cleanliness in charge.

Moreover
, they are the most generous
ones
who do not
hastily
come
claiming for their
just
deserve earnings. The way they
diligently
take up their work is beyond compare.

Looking forward to
see
a deserving candidate getting appreciated this time.

Yours
sincerely
,
Karishma
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award to the community. Mention who should get this award. What he does for the community and why you think he should be offered the award.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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