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Your local newspaper is offering an award to the community.Mention who should get this award. What he does for the community and why you think he should be offered the award.

Your local newspaper is offering an award to the community. Mention who should get this award. What he does for the community and why you think he should be offered the award. E3rQb

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to help you in shortlisting the candidate for the most contributing person in the community. I would like to suggest a person too. The award winning is a big encouragement and I think the right person should be encouraged to continue doing better. In my opinion, the cleanliness boys specially the ones who on time come to collect garbage early morning are the ones deserving of this prestigious honour. These young lads without fail they collect and clean the disgusting bit thrown on streets as well. In order to make them feel vital and discourage taking the ownership of doing cleanliness jobs and calling it menial will have an impact. We will make some difference in society by rewarding the cleanliness in charge. Moreover, they are the most generous ones who do not hastily come claiming for their just deserve earnings. The way they diligently take up their work is beyond compare. Looking forward to see a deserving candidate getting appreciated this time. Yours sincerely, Karishma

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you in shortlisting the candidate for the most contributing person in the community. I would like to suggest a person too.

The This word is normally spelled with hyphen.award-winning
award winning
 is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 encouragement and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the right person should be encouraged
 to continue doing better. In my opinion, the cleanliness boys specially
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ones
 who on time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to collect garbage early morning are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 deserving of this prestigious Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
honour
. These young lads without fail they collect and clean the disgusting bit thrown on streets as well
. In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them feel vital and discourage taking the ownership of doing cleanliness jobs and calling it menial will have an impact. We will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 difference in society by rewarding the cleanliness in charge.

Moreover
, they are the most generous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 who do not hastily
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come
 claiming for their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 deserve earnings. The way they diligently
 take up their work is beyond compare.

Looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a deserving candidate getting appreciated this time.

Yours sincerely
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Karishma