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Write a complaint letter to car service company about their unsatisfactory service

Write a complaint letter to car service company about their unsatisfactory service BJqOV

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to inform my strong discontent about the not well service provided by your company. In fact that I have waited the best service from you. On 13rd of May, I visited your work place in order to repair my private car. Because it was not working properly. I went to reception and talked about it with a workshop assistant. When I took all data's about it I decided to leave my car in your work place for a day. After a day I went there again and I drove it, it was working properly, then I paid for your service. However, two days ago, when I was going to my friend's party by my car, it was broken again. I was late for my close friend's party as a result of your service. And Now, I would like you to repair my car. I am looking forward to your reply and tackle the problem. Please contact me quickly. Yours faithfully, Ann Brown

Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing to inform my strong discontent about the not well You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 provided by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In fact that I have waited the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 from you.

On 13rd of May, I visited your work place in order to repair my private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 it was not working properly
. I went to reception and talked about it with a workshop assistant. When I took all data's about Consider adding a comma here.it,
it
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 in your work place for a day. After a day I went there again and I drove it, it was working properly
, then I paid for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. However
, two days ago, when I was going to my friend's party by my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
, it was broken
 again. I was late for my close friend's party as a result
 of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I would like you to repair my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. I am looking forward to your reply and tackle the problem.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me quickly
.

Yours faithfully
,

Ann Brown