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Write a complaint letter to car service company about their unsatisfactory service

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Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to inform my strong discontent about the not well service provided by your company. In fact that I have waited the best service from you. On 13rd of May, I visited your work place in order to repair my private car. Because it was not working properly. I went to reception and talked about it with a workshop assistant. When I took all data's about it I decided to leave my car in your work place for a day. After a day I went there again and I drove it, it was working properly, then I paid for your service. However, two days ago, when I was going to my friend's party by my car, it was broken again. I was late for my close friend's party as a result of your service. And Now, I would like you to repair my car. I am looking forward to your reply and tackle the problem. Please contact me quickly. Yours faithfully, Ann Brown
Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing to inform my strong discontent about the not well
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service
provided by your
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company
. In fact that I have waited the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
from you.

On 13rd of May, I visited your work place in order to repair my private
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
it was not working
properly
. I went to reception and talked about it with a workshop assistant. When I took all data's about
Consider adding a comma here.
it
I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
in your work place for a day. After a day I went there again and I drove it, it was working
properly
, then I paid for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
.
However
, two days ago, when I was going to my friend's party by my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, it
was broken
again. I was late for my close friend's party
as a result
of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. And
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I would like you to repair my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. I am looking forward to your reply and tackle the problem.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact me
quickly
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ann Brown

IELTS letter Write a complaint letter to car service company about their unsatisfactory service

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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