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You have lost your important item in the train. Write a letter to the respective authority with concern.

You have lost your important item in the train. Write a letter to the respective authority with concern. 15l2W
Dear Sir or Madam, The objective of writing this letter is to inform the loss of a valuable property in one of your trains. The item is my black leather wallet and has the brand name “Puma” printed on the top. The purse consists of a driver’s license, a credit card, a food card, a shopping card and a debit card – all are in my name. Furthermore, it has some little amount of money as well: $25 I guess. I believe, I lost the item around at 4. 50 PM, in the train “Chennai Express”, while travelling from Alappuzha to Ernakulum, on Yesterday (15-05-2021). I could remember the sitting position in the aforementioned train, seat number 65 in the 3rd coach from the engine, as it was reserved earlier through an online booking application. Could you please let me know whether you got any wallet with the descriptions as mentioned? If you got the item, please keep it in a safe place and I will arrange someone to collect it from there at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Gayathri
Dear Sir or Madam,

The objective of writing this letter is to inform the loss of a valuable property in one of your trains.

The item is my black leather wallet and has the brand name “Puma” printed on the top.
The
purse consists of a driver’s license, a credit
card
, a food
card
, a shopping
card
and a debit
card
all are in my name.
Furthermore
, it has
some
little
amount of money
as well
: $25 I guess.

I believe, I lost the item around at 4. 50 PM, in the train “Chennai Express”, while travelling from
Alappuzha
to
Ernakulum
, on Yesterday (15-05-2021). I could remember the sitting position in the aforementioned train, seat number 65 in the 3rd coach from the engine, as it
was reserved
earlier through an online booking application.

Could you
please
let
me know whether you
got
any wallet with the descriptions as mentioned? If you
got
the item,
please
keep
it in a safe place and I will arrange someone to collect it from there at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Gayathri
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IELTS letter You have lost your important item in the train. Write a letter to the respective authority with concern.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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