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Applying for a part-time job

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Dear Sir, I am a student from Uzbekistan. For years last two months I have even studying at the Technological university, here in Nebraska. As my lessons last from 8 till 12 a. m I am free in the afternoons. Therefore I am looking for a part time job and I wonder if you can help me. Being a student occupies most of the time, but I can work inthe afternoons and at the weekends. Probably, I am eager to workin the office. While I was in Uzbekistan and having a degree course, I had worked as an computer programming for a buy and sell online company. In addition, to my Technological knowledge I can speak in Russian and English fluently. Moreover I have been learning French for a year. As I am sociable and get along with people perfectly, I can work in the registrations of the hotels. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, John Brown.

Dear Sir, I am a student from Uzbekistan. For years last two months I have even studying at the Technological university, here in Nebraska. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 my lessons last Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 8 to 12"?from 8 to 12
from 8 till 12
 a. m I am free in the afternoons. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
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part time
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help
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but
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 computer programming for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and sell online This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In addition
, to my Technological knowledge I can speak in Russian and English fluently
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I have been learning French for a year. As I am sociable and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 along with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
perfectly
, I can work in the registrations of the hotels. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours faithfully
, John Brown. 