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Your recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good .You wanted to tell him how you feel.

Your recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You wanted to tell him how you feel. 1jNA

Dear Mr. Chester, I hope this letter find you in good health and best of spirit. I recently attendant your vibrant concert held in army golf stadium on 12th September. Hands down it was once of the greatest Music gig I have been too. I was mesmerized by your phenomenal performance and songs. I must convey my outmost gratitude for your dazzling energy you were simply outstanding. I am an university student and pursing my master in hotel management. Besides this my passion for music have never stopped. To pursue the same I have enrolled myself in music academy where is spend plethora amount of time during my weekends where I learn guitar and apart from that I getting my skeptics on playing violin. I also have an YouTube channel where I showcase my skill and looking forward to start my own music band in future. It would be really generous of you if you offer me some tips in playing guitar. Furthermore, I am facing some issues with the lyrics and vocals however the other day I was going through your blog on the internet I came to know that you are an outstanding lyricist. I hope if you would spare some of your precious time and assist me. Thank you in advance! Your Sincerely, Manjeet Mankani

Dear Mr. Chester,

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Thank you in advance!

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