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Your friend elderly parents will be visiting your city on vacation.

Your friend elderly parents will be visiting your city on vacation. WwMK
Dear Alka, Hope this letter finds in radiant health and the best of spirits. My joy knew no bounds when I read that your elderly parents are coming to Hyderabad for holiday. There is lot to see in and around Hyderabad, India. There are many Mosques, temples, and also many ancient monuments. Out of the all, Charminar in Old City, Golkonda Fort and Salarjung Museum are the best, they can enjoy. There is also a beautiful lake at necklace road, having the” Buddha Statue “ in middle of it. It is one of the most important destinations in Hyderabad. They will have lots of fun and frolic during this trip. As far as stay is concerned, there are lots of 5 star hotels in the city, but they have to be booked well in advance. The best I can say is ITC, which is just 20 kilometers away from the Shamshabad Airport. However, it would be my great pleasure if they can stay with us during this trip in my house. I along with my parents are inviting them to our house and I would assure you, they will have a beautiful vacation. Hoping to see your Parents soon! Yours lovingly, Ravi.
Dear
Alka
,

Hope this letter finds in radiant health and the best of spirits. My joy knew no bounds when I read that your elderly parents are coming to Hyderabad for holiday.

There is lot to
see
in and around Hyderabad, India. There are
many
Mosques, temples, and
also
many
ancient monuments. Out of the all,
Charminar
in
Old
City,
Golkonda
Fort and
Salarjung
Museum are the best, they can enjoy. There is
also
a
beautiful
lake at necklace road, having the” Buddha Statue
in middle of it. It is one of the most
important
destinations in Hyderabad. They will have lots of fun and frolic during this trip.

As far as stay
is concerned
, there are lots of
5 star
hotels in the city,
but
they
have to
be booked
well in advance. The best I can say is ITC, which is
just
20 kilometers away from the
Shamshabad
Airport.
However
, it would be my great pleasure if they can stay with us during this trip in my
house
. I along with my parents are inviting them to our
house
and I would assure you, they will have a
beautiful
vacation. Hoping to
see
your Parents
soon
!

Yours
lovingly
,

Ravi.
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IELTS letter Your friend elderly parents will be visiting your city on vacation.

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