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Your recently did a home renovation. Write a letter to your friend and suggest to use your tradesman if he/she needs one. In your letter – Tell your friend about the renovation – Recommend your tradesman – Explain why this is a good idea.

Your recently did a home renovation. Write a letter to your friend and suggest to use your tradesman if he/she needs one. In your letter – Tell your friend about the renovation – Recommend your tradesman – Explain why this is a good idea. 750b3

Dear Kriti, I hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time we meet. Last time before six month when we meet I discussed with you about my building renovation. I am happy to know you, it has finished last week. As I remember that you are also planning for renovation soon, so I decided to share my experience with you and also give you few useful tips. As you know before renovation my building looks like old heritage place but now it is completely redesigned. I furnished my bedroom with latest deign and repaint the walls with my favorite color pink. Moreover, I decorated my house with unique antic showpieces. From my personal experience, renovating a home is not an easy plan but my sister suggested me a tradesman who has a great team of painter, plumber, electricians and laborers so decided to give contract to him. I am very impressed with his work because he completed my home on time and within budget. I will recommend this tradesman to you because his prices are reasonable and he uses unique and high quality materials. As you are also planning to change layout of your house with repaint the walls. I think you should hire this man, he take every job seriously. Let me know if you need the contact details of the tradesman. I wish to meet you soon. Tack care and write back soon. Best Regards, Devangi

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.Kristi
Kriti
,

I hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
. Last time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 six Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 I discussed with you about my building renovation. I am happy to know you, it has finished last week. As I remember that you are also
 planning for renovation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I decided to share my experience with you and also
 give you few useful tips.

As you know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 renovation my building looks like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 heritage place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is completely redesigned. I furnished my bedroom with latest deign and repaint the walls with my favorite color pink. Moreover
, I decorated my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 with unique antic showpieces.

From my personal experience, renovating a home is not an easy plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my sister suggested me a tradesman who has a great team of painter, plumber, electricians and laborers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 decided to give contract to him. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 impressed with his work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he completed my home on time and within budget. I will recommend this tradesman to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 his prices are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).reasonable, and
reasonable and
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 unique and high quality materials.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you are also
 planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 layout of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 with repaint the walls. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should hire this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
, he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "takes", "took".takestook
take
 every job seriously
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know if you need the contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of the tradesman.

I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Tack care and write back This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.Derange
Devangi