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Ms Samantha Bruin Senior Nurse at Greywalls Nursing Home 27 Station Road, Greywalls Dear Ms. bruin, RE: Mr Gerald Baker, 79 years I am writing this letter to inform you regarding Ms. samantha bruin who requires further assistance and care following total hip replacement surgery. Ms. bean was admitted on 3/7/2018 with complaints of difficulty in moving and climbing the stairs. the further evaluation confirmed osteoarthritis and the surgery was done the very next day. Postoperatively, her haemoglobin level dropped to 72g/dl and was managed by blood transfusion. She commenced on aspirin 100mg, ramipril 5mg and pandeine. Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of hypertension and osteoarthritis. Socially, she is a widower and lives in a nursing home for the past 4 years. She has no children but her sister, Ms dowm manson visits her regularly. she is an aged pensioner. As per the discharge plan, it would be greatly appreciated if you could dress the surgery incision site. please encourage him to do stretching and strengthening exercises. Also, occupational therapy would be beneficial for him. Kindly note his blood haemoglobin level for anaemia. of note, his staples have to be removed in two weeks time and kindly follow up FBC and UEC test. Thank you for accepting Ms. baker into your facility. please call me if you have any queries. Charge nurse Greenland hospital
Ms Samantha Bruin

Senior Nurse at
Greywalls
Nursing Home

27 Station Road,

Greywalls


Dear Ms. bruin,

RE: Mr Gerald Baker, 79 years

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding Ms.
samantha
bruin who requires
further
assistance and care following total hip replacement surgery.

Ms. bean
was admitted
on 3/7/2018 with complaints of difficulty in moving and climbing the stairs.
the
further
evaluation confirmed osteoarthritis and the surgery
was done
the
very
next
day.
Postoperatively
, her
haemoglobin
level dropped to 72g/
dl
and
was managed
by blood transfusion. She commenced on aspirin
100mg
,
ramipril
5mg
and
pandeine
.

Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of hypertension and osteoarthritis.
Socially
, she is a widower and
lives
in a nursing home for the past 4 years. She has no children
but
her sister, Ms
dowm
manson
visits her
regularly
.
she
is an aged pensioner.

As per the discharge plan, it would be
greatly
appreciated if you could dress the surgery incision site.
please
encourage him to
do stretching
and strengthening exercises.
Also
, occupational therapy would be beneficial for him. Kindly note his blood
haemoglobin
level for
anaemia
.
of
note, his staples
have to
be removed
in two weeks time and kindly follow up
FBC
and UEC
test
.

Thank you for accepting Ms. baker into your facility.
please
call me if you have any queries.

Charge nurse

Greenland hospital
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229 words
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