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Letter to singer and appreciate his performance

Letter to singer and appreciate his performance Lw3P6

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to provide a feedback on the “Kitchen Wonders” cookery course I have taken receHi Jay, I am writing to you to provide a feedback of your recent concert at GIFT city. I and my friends attended the show and it was fantastic, you totally rock it. The song selection and band was great and I was able to see the audience were delighted. I am a beginner as musician, i self-taught piano and practice regular on weekend atleast 2-3 hours to improve it. I and the band, we usually play at small function as birthday parties and all. Yesterday at the concert your performance made me to think more on my music career. You are famous musician and pretty occupied in tours for couple of month. I am hoping as in next month you will be having tour in Delhi and its my hometown, if you will have sometime to see our performance and share feedback of improvement that will be great help. If this allow in your schedule, please inform me. I am hoping for positive response from you all the very best for upcoming tours. Thanks you, Vibha ntly. As my cooking had become more and more complimented since, I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for the evolution I have attained from the course. Albeit a short and basic course, it contained useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which were entirely new to me. Having always cooked by instinct these tips brought to ligh simple mistake I had been making, which now I avoid. Moreover, I particularly enjoyed the “Kitchecn Hacks” module and its techniques have brought my cooking skills to a new level. I have been using these lessons on weekends, when I normally cook for my family, and the difference is clear. The effect of the course had on my dishes has been remarked on some occasions and this new found ability has been raining expectations as the word spreads throughout my relatives. Still, I am confident they shall not be disappointed. I intend on honing this skill further, especially since the course did not address dessert-making. Should such a course be offered, I would be delighted to enroll and keep collecting awestruck expressions from my relatives. I really appreciate the results your course has provided me, and I look forward to even more. Sincerely, Vibha

Dear Sir or Madam,

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.

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 function as birthday parties and all. Yesterday at the concert your performance made me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 month. I am hoping as in next
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 best for upcoming tours.

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,

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. As my cooking had become more and more complimented since, I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for the evolution I have attained from the course.

Albeit a short and basic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
, it contained useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which were entirely
 new to me. Having always cooked by instinct these tips brought to Possible spelling mistake found.highlifelightliftLeighBligh
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 simple mistake I had been making, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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 I avoid. Moreover
, I particularly
 enjoyed the “Possible spelling mistake found.Kitchen
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 Hacks” module and its techniques have brought my cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
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 to a new level.

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 cook for my family, and the difference is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
. The effect of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
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 ability has been raining expectations as the word spreads throughout my relatives. Still
, I am confident they shall not be disappointed
.

I intend on honing this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
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, especially
 since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 did not address dessert-making. Should such a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
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be offered
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keep
 collecting awestruck expressions from my relatives. I really
 appreciate the results your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 has provided me, and I look forward to even more.

Sincerely
,

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Vibha