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Letter to invite your friend on special occasion party which organisation

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Dear ram, Hope this letter find your radiant health and the best of spirits, I am writing this letter to invite you and your family on this Diwali festival. Actually, me and my family made a plane to organise a small party on Diwali. You know as Diwali is one of India's famous festival and people who belongs to all religions they are celebrated Diwali and doing plethora of activities. People do worship to lord Rama and guru Hargobhid Shaib ji because Hindu people celebrate this Festival because the lord Rama came back after fourteen years exile to ajudhea and guru Hargobhid Shaib ji released with 14 kings from gwarial fort. So, you and your family join me on this day because we doing plethora of things such as crack th fires and wear new clothes also we will going to famous golden temple of Amritsar. We will spent gud time with our family. . Hope you see you soon, Yours faithfully, Gur.
Dear ram, Hope this letter find your radiant health and the best of spirits, I am writing this letter to invite you and your
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on this Diwali festival. Actually, me and my
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family
made a
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Hargobhid
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Shaib
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Hindu
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people
celebrate this Festival
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the lord Rama came back after fourteen years exile to
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and guru
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Hargobhid
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Shaib
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released with 14 kings from
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fort.
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me on this day
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because
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plethora of things such as crack
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fires and wear new clothes
also
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golden temple of Amritsar. We will
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spent
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time with our
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IELTS letter Letter to invite your friend on special occasion party which organisation

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  American English
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163 words
5.0
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