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Letter to invite your friend on special occasion party which organisation

Letter to invite your friend on special occasion party which organisation j5QgL

Dear ram, Hope this letter find your radiant health and the best of spirits, I am writing this letter to invite you and your family on this Diwali festival. Actually, me and my family made a plane to organise a small party on Diwali. You know as Diwali is one of India's famous festival and people who belongs to all religions they are celebrated Diwali and doing plethora of activities. People do worship to lord Rama and guru Hargobhid Shaib ji because Hindu people celebrate this Festival because the lord Rama came back after fourteen years exile to ajudhea and guru Hargobhid Shaib ji released with 14 kings from gwarial fort. So, you and your family join me on this day because we doing plethora of things such as crack th fires and wear new clothes also we will going to famous golden temple of Amritsar. We will spent gud time with our family. . Hope you see you soon, Yours faithfully, Gur.

Dear ram, Hope this letter find your radiant health and the best of spirits, I am writing this letter to invite you and your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 on this Diwali festival. Actually, me and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 made a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 to Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 party on Diwali. You know as Diwali is one of India's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 festival and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who Did you mean "belong"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.belong
belongs
 to all religions they are celebrated
 Diwali and doing plethora of activities. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 do worship to lord Rama and guru Possible spelling mistake found.
Hargobhid
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Shaib
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because
 Hindu This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 celebrate this Festival This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the lord Rama came back after fourteen years exile to Possible spelling mistake found.Judea
ajudhea
 and guru Possible spelling mistake found.
Hargobhid
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Shaib
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 released with 14 kings from Possible spelling mistake found.glacialArial
gwarial
 fort. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, you and your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 me on this day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Did you mean "we're doing", "we are doing", or "we were doing"?we're doingwe are doingwe were doing
we doing
 plethora of things such as crack Possible spelling mistake found.THThthetothoTT
th
 fires and wear new clothes also
 we will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
going
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 golden temple of Amritsar. We will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "spend"spend
spent
Possible spelling mistake found.Godgungodguymudgum
gud
 time with our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 Hope you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, Yours faithfully
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Gur
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