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you are invited for your friends birthday and you are not able to attend. inform them regarding that and tell them to meet someday for lunch.

you are invited for your friends birthday and you are not able to attend. inform them regarding that and tell them to meet someday for lunch. 66pej
Dear Laura, how are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I received your birthday invitation today. I am happy to hear that you are celebrating your birthday in Taj Vivantha our all time favourite seaside hotel. also, I am extremely happy for the invite. I would really love to attend this function and I was exited to meet you and your family. on top of that it wold have been our old friends get together after a long time. however, I will not be able to attend the function this time because, my son's graduation ceremony is on the same day. College management has requested to attend the ceremony without fail. moreover, its actually a proud moment for me as a mother. although I will not be able to attend the function, I wish I could see the photos and videos of the occasion so, please don't forget to send me all photos in whatsapp. furthermore, can we meet next Sunday for lunch in Holiday- inn. let me know your convenience. take care and write back soon
Dear Laura,

how are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I received your birthday invitation
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today
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I
am happy to hear that you are celebrating your birthday in
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Taj
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Vivantha
our
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all time
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favourite
seaside hotel.
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also
, I am
extremely
happy for the invite.

I would
really
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love
to
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attend
this
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function and
I
was exited
to
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meet
you and your family.
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on
top of that
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it wold
have been our
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old
friends
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get
together after a long time.

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however
, I will not be able to
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attend
the function this time
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because
, my son's graduation ceremony is on the same day. College management has requested to
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attend
the ceremony without fail.
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moreover
, its actually a proud moment for me as a mother.

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although
I will not be able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attend
the function, I wish I could
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see
the photos and videos of the occasion
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so
,
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please
don't forget to
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send
me all photos in
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whatsapp
.

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furthermore
, can we
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meet
next
Sunday for lunch in Holiday- inn.
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let
me know your convenience.

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take
care and write back
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soon
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IELTS letter you are invited for your friends birthday and you are not able to attend. inform them regarding that and tell them to meet someday for lunch.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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