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friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend

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A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, – thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it – describe some other presents that you received – explain some of the things you did on your birthday. Dear James, I am writing this letter to inform you that I received your present on my birthday morning through courier. My birthday morning was the best as first thing which I did was opening of your gift. I am very grateful to you for giving me the guitar as I needed it desperately. I really like exploring and learning new things and now I will be able learn this. I promise you that I will play a song for you with this guitar on your birthday. I would also like to mention that I missed your presence very much on my special day. I went for a pizza party in the afternoon with my neighbourhood friends. In addition to that, my relatives came over at my place in evening and bought a cake for me. My parents gave me a watch & my cousins gave me a photo collage. However, your present was the best of all. I am very thankful to you and hoping that we will meet soon so that I can thank you in person. Lots of Love Surbhi Khatri

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present
. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 thank her for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
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 like it Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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describe
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presents
 that you received Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 things you did on your birthday.

Dear James,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I received your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 on my birthday morning through courier. My birthday morning was the best as first
 thing which I did This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
was
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "open"open
opening
 of your gift. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful to you for giving me the guitar as I needed it desperately
. I really
 like exploring and learning new things and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I will be The preposition 'to' is required in front of the verb 'learn'.able to learn
able learn
 this. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 promise you that I will play a song for you with this guitar on your birthday.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would also
 like to mention that I missed your presence This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much on my special day. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 went for a pizza party in the afternoon with my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
 friends. In addition
 to that, my relatives came over at my place in evening and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a cake for me. My parents gave me a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 & my cousins gave me a photo collage. However
, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 was the best of all.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 thankful to you and hoping that we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can thank you in person.

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


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Surbhi
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Khatri