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Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities.

Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities. r18Qm
Dear Sir / Madam, I am planning a holiday with my family next month to Sydney and I am writing this to you to inquire some details of your hotel. Firstly, I would like to know if it would be possible to book a double room for 05 nights from Saturday 5th to Wednesday 10 of August. Also, I would prefer to have room with a sea view. Secondly can you please let me know the hotel facilities available specially the outdoor activities. Lastly, would like to know do you’ll have any day trips organized by the hotel to places around Sydney such as nature park, beach sides or botanical gardens. If so, could you kindly send me a brochure with the details. Thank you for your kind attention. I look forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Azree Uduman
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am planning a holiday with my family
next
month to
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Sydney and
I am writing this to you to inquire
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of your hotel.

Firstly
, I would like to know if it would be possible to book a double room for 05 nights from Saturday 5th to Wednesday 10 of August.
Also
, I would prefer to have room with a sea view.
Secondly
can you
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know the hotel facilities available
specially
the outdoor activities.

Lastly
, would like to know do you’ll have any day trips organized by the hotel to places around Sydney such as nature park, beach sides or botanical gardens. If
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, could you kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a brochure with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.

Thank you for your kind attention. I look forward hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Azree
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IELTS letter Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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