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Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities.

Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities. r18Qm

Dear Sir / Madam, I am planning a holiday with my family next month to Sydney and I am writing this to you to inquire some details of your hotel. Firstly, I would like to know if it would be possible to book a double room for 05 nights from Saturday 5th to Wednesday 10 of August. Also, I would prefer to have room with a sea view. Secondly can you please let me know the hotel facilities available specially the outdoor activities. Lastly, would like to know do you’ll have any day trips organized by the hotel to places around Sydney such as nature park, beach sides or botanical gardens. If so, could you kindly send me a brochure with the details. Thank you for your kind attention. I look forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Azree Uduman

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am planning a holiday with my family next
 month to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Sydney, and
Sydney and
 I am writing this to you to inquire This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of your hotel.

Firstly
, I would like to know if it would be possible to book a double room for 05 nights from Saturday 5th to Wednesday 10 of August. Also
, I would prefer to have room with a sea view. Secondly
 can you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know the hotel facilities available specially
 the outdoor activities.

Lastly
, would like to know do you’ll have any day trips organized by the hotel to places around Sydney such as nature park, beach sides or botanical gardens. If This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, could you kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me a brochure with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

Thank you for your kind attention. I look forward hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Your planning a holiday to Australia. Write a letter letter to the hotel inquiring the hotel facilities.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

138 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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