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I have just received your letter in which you asked for my opinion about whether to go to college or start your job research.Well, I’m glad that you asked for my advice and I would be delighted to share my point of view towards both o

I have just received your letter in which you asked for my opinion about whether to go to college or start your job research. Well, I’m glad that you asked for my advice and I would be delighted to share my point of view towards both o 2r5O6
Dear paul, I have just received your letter in which you asked for my opinion about whether to go to college or start your job research. Well, I’m glad that you asked for my advice and I would be delighted to share my point of view towards both options. Pursuing your studies in college requires a lot of perseverance and money. Indeed, the fees of the language college which you’re intended to go to are exorbitant, therefore, you have to study and work simultaneously to fund your studies, which is quite stressful and time-consuming. Besides, it’s highly probable that you may fail. On the other hand, I highly recommend taking a year gap, maybe two, in order to have a thorough knowledge about the job market, acquire some experience and earn some money. Owing to your impressive communication skills, and your sense of humour, working in a call center is the best option for you. The monthly pay is quite satisfying and you will have the chance to take your English skills to the next level. In this way, you will kill two birds with one stone. I hope this information was relevant to your request and I wish you the best luck. Cheers, Mehdi
Dear
paul
,

I have
just
received your letter in which you
asked for
my opinion about whether to go to college or
start
your job research. Well, I’m glad that you
asked for
my advice and I would
be delighted
to share my point of view towards both options.

Pursuing your studies in college requires
a lot of
perseverance and money.
Indeed
, the fees of the language college which you’re intended to go to are exorbitant,
therefore
, you
have to
study and work
simultaneously
to fund your studies, which is quite stressful and time-consuming.
Besides
, it’s
highly
probable that you may fail.

On the other hand
, I
highly
recommend taking a year gap, maybe two, in order to have a thorough knowledge about the job market, acquire
some
experience and earn
some
money.

Owing to your impressive communication
skills
, and your sense of
humour
, working in a call center is the best option for you. The monthly pay is quite satisfying and you will have the chance to take your English
skills
to the
next
level. In this way, you will kill two birds with one stone.

I hope this information was relevant to your request and I wish you the best luck.

Cheers,

Mehdi
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IELTS letter I have just received your letter in which you asked for my opinion about whether to go to college or start your job research. Well, I’m glad that you asked for my advice and I would be delighted to share my point of view towards both o

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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