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You have just missed a friend's party. Write a letter to appologise

You have just missed a friend's party. Write a letter to appologise Mom2o

Dear Sarah, I hope you are well and you had a fantastic time on your birthday. I am sorry that I could not attend your birthday celebration party and for letting you know beforehand that I wouldn't be able to come. I feel terrible that I could not contact you during this period. The truth is I had a very important meeting to attend along with my boss with one of our valued customers, and I could not tell this to anyone because as my boss strictly instruct everyone to keep this meeting secret and it should not be leaked until we complete the task. Therefore, despite of all of these, still I want to celebrate your birthday with you. So, I would like to propose you to have a dinner with me along with your family and friend circle. Let's celebrate your birthday party once again. There is no harm to celebrate birthday twice in a year. Hope you might like this idea and accept my sincere apologies. Keep in touch, Jack

Dear Sarah,

I hope you are well and you had a fantastic time on your birthday.

I am sorry that I could not attend your birthday celebration party and for letting you know beforehand that I wouldn't be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel terrible that I could not contact you during this period.

The truth is I had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 meeting to attend along with my boss with one of our valued customers, and I could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 this to anyone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 as my boss strictly
 instruct everyone to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 this meeting secret and it should not be leaked
 until we complete the task.

Therefore
, Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?despite
despite of
 all of these, still
 I want to celebrate your birthday with you. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would like to propose you to When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "have dinner".have dinner
have a dinner
 with me along with your family and friend circle. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's celebrate your birthday party once again. There is no harm to celebrate birthday twice in a year.

Hope you might like this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and accept my sincere apologies. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphJack.Jack!Jack?Jack:Jack,Jack;
Jack