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You are volunteering at a children's charity. You are raising money for a children's activity. Your task is to contact local businesses to raise this money. In about 150-200 words, write an email to a local company. Your email should do the following things: - Introduce your charity and explain what it does - Explain the activity you are planning. - Ask for money and explain how it will be spent.

You are volunteering at a children's charity. You are raising money for a children's activity. Your task is to contact local businesses to raise this money. In about 150-200 words, write an email to a local company. Your email should do the following things: - Introduce your charity and explain what it does - Explain the activity you are planning. - Ask for money and explain how it will be spent. KWnR1
Dear Sir/Madam, We are raising funds for disabled and orphan children, and as a volunteer here, my work is to contact several businesses to seek aid for these underprivileged ones. Our agency name is ‘Every kid matters! ’ which has been providing all the requisites to the needy children for ten years. We are currently helping ten thousand kids and have had helped more than lakhs. We take care of everything of them like tuition expenses, clothes and toys, everyday meals and not only this, we even take them on vacations abroad to learn about various cultures. In the first week of December, we plan to take our sharp minds to seek their fortune abroad. They can take admission to any international university for further studies. On behalf of my whole team, I respectfully request your kind courtesy towards our young ones. Any amount as hand-outs would be more than appreciable. As discussed above, all the money would be utilized for children’s education and their day-to-day activities. For any queries, you can always ask by phoning at 6789 or via an open communication through email. Best Regards, Nick brick
Dear Sir/Madam,

We are raising funds for disabled and orphan children, and as a volunteer here, my work is to contact several businesses to seek aid for these underprivileged ones.

Our agency name is ‘Every kid matters! ’ which has been providing all the requisites to the needy children for ten years. We are
currently
helping ten thousand kids and have had
helped
more than lakhs. We take care of everything of them like tuition expenses, clothes and toys, everyday meals and not
only
this, we even take them on vacations abroad to learn about various cultures.

In the
first
week of December, we plan to take our sharp minds to seek their fortune abroad. They can take admission to any international university for
further
studies.

On behalf of my whole team, I
respectfully
request your kind courtesy towards our young ones. Any amount as hand-outs would be more than appreciable. As discussed above, all the money would
be utilized
for children’s education and their day-to-day activities.

For any queries, you can always ask by phoning at 6789 or via an open communication through email.

Best Regards,

Nick brick
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IELTS letter You are volunteering at a children's charity. You are raising money for a children's activity. Your task is to contact local businesses to raise this money. In about 150-200 words, write an email to a local company. Your email should do the following things: - Introduce your charity and explain what it does - Explain the activity you are planning. - Ask for money and explain how it will be spent.

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  American English
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188 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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