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YOU WORK FOR AN INTERNATIONAL COMPANY. YOU HAVE SEEN AN ADVERTISEMENT FOR A TRAINING COURSE WHICH WILL BE USEFUL FOR YOUR JOB.

YOU WORK FOR AN INTERNATIONAL COMPANY. YOU HAVE SEEN AN ADVERTISEMENT FOR A TRAINING COURSE WHICH WILL BE USEFUL FOR YOUR JOB. bEbAP

Dear Mrs. Laylo, I am writing in connection with the online course that was advertised on the newspaper that I was reading this morning. 21 The course is about Basic Accounting with Value Added Tax for a total of 100 hours. The class will be held every Sunday of the week. The focus of this course is to discuss and differentiate the types of tax to use per industry type. The course mentioned will give aid in the preparation up to the submission of reports, understanding the bracket schedules per company group and the minimum profit of voluntary payers. 73 As you know, I already have an existing loan in the company which is payable until next year. I would like to request financial assistance on this matter as the online course is quite expensive. I reckoned that our company provide an allowance for employees who would pursue further studies on their field. Thus, I would like to apply my online course on this program to be able to finance my studies. I would need your assistance in guiding me on to how I can avail this program as well as the documents to submit. 95 As the Team lead of our Finance department, this course will widen my skills and will serve as my guiding tool in tax reports. Although, we have external Tax accountants who are tasked to process our reports but by the time I have completed this online course, I can solely manage this on my own. I can assure you that we no longer need external assistance in our financial statements. I can also conduct a training to share my knowledge to the team by giving them hands-on coaching on this area. 90 Looking forward to your assistance on this request. Thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, Margaret Solidio

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course
 mentioned will give aid in the preparation up to the submission of reports, understanding the bracket schedules per This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
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company
 which is payable until next
 year. I would like to request financial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhelpservicebackingsupportbenefitcompensation
assistance
 on this matter as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 is quite expensive. I reckoned that our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 provide an allowance for employees who would pursue further
 studies on their field. Thus
, I would like to apply my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 on this program to be able to finance my studies. I would need your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhelpservicebackingsupportbenefitcompensation
assistance
 in guiding me on to how I can avail this program as well
 as the documents to submit. 95

As the Team lead of our Finance department, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 will widen my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and will serve as my guiding tool in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
tax
 reports. Although, we have external You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Tax
 accountants who are tasked
 to process our reports This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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online
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course
, I can solely
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. I can assure you that we no longer need external You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhelpservicebackingsupportbenefitcompensation
assistance
 in our financial statements. I can also
 conduct a training to share my knowledge to the team by giving them hands-on coaching on this area. 90

Looking forward to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhelpservicebackingsupportbenefitcompensation
assistance
 on this request. Thanking you in advance.

Yours faithfully
,

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